fix: remove em dashes and tighten copy (unslop audit)#7
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Fixes found in unslop-text audit: - Home page: em dash in hero description (diagram—great → diagram, great) - About lede: em dash before list (text — for → text: ) - About partners: we/I voice flip, "happily" adverb, spaced-hyphen-as-dash Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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| so we add a few optional partner links - use them if you were already considering the service. It | ||
| will help us keep the site running. The referral bonuses come from the provider. Here I recommend | ||
| the services that I happily use myself. | ||
| so I add a few optional partner links. Use them if you were already considering the service; it |
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Давай заменим ; на запятую.
| <strong class="font-semibold text-gray-800 dark:text-gray-200">{DISPLAY_NAME}</strong> is a free, | ||
| browser-based tool for drawing word-to-word and morpheme-to-morpheme links between stacked lines of | ||
| text — for bilingual glosses, interlinear annotations, classroom handouts, and social posts. Everything | ||
| text: bilingual glosses, interlinear annotations, classroom handouts, and social posts. Everything |
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Двоеточие это тоже странная пунктуация. Давай напишем "of text such as.."
- semicolon → comma after "considering the service" - colon → "such as" in the lede list Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Summary
Text audit using the unslop-text skill found a few COPYRIGHT.md violations and one structural issue across two pages.
+page.svelte:270): em dash indiagram—great for lessons→ commaabout/+page.svelte:248): em dash before listtext — for bilingual glosses...→ colonabout/+page.svelte:455–459): three issues in four sentenceswe add→I add(voice was flipping between "we" and "I" in the same paragraph)partner links - use them(spaced hyphen as dash) → periodI happily use myself→I use myself(adverb with no factual meaning)Here I recommend(meta-filler phrase) → droppedTest plan
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